Electronic Portfolios

Looking over my blog, it is clear to me how much I have learned about digital writing in the last few months. I came into this course knowing very little about wikis, weblogs, vlogs (I had no idea what a vlog was), and using the many applications that we have explored. I now know how to create a video and upload it to Youtube AND link it to my blog. I am much more confident in discussing digital uses with my students and I've already incorporated much of what I've learned into my courses. One thing I have my students do now is to post their writing on their blogs and reflect on it. Having students collect their work in an electronic portfolio where they can reflect on it in a blog is a great way to get students to consider what they've done and how far they've come. I would certainly have students include their major writing assignments, but also pieces of prewriting and drafts of papers--with reflection--would allow(force) students to think about the writing process and how their writing changes not only throughout the year, but also within the context of a single writing piece. Students could also take in-class writing pieces and revise them for inclusion in their portfolios. Then they would be able to reflect on their writing and the feedback that they received on it.

Online Feedback

I am excited to use online feedback this year. I am especially interested in using virtual office hours, as suggested in the reading. I don't know why I never considered this idea before, but it is something I hope to incorporate in my class this year. My sophomores are working on their big research papers right now so I don't think I have enough time to get them on board, but next semester I think it will work. I plan to use the moodle chat feature to set up a time for writing conferences. My students are often not in the right frame of mind to discuss their writing either before school, since they'd have to get up early to see me, or after school, when they're drained from the day. I know that most of my students work on their writing pretty late at night. Since I have children, it would fit well in my schedule to conference with kids at 9 or 10 at night. I have a student whose work I recently used as a sample in my classroom. She is a decent writer, but has trouble with some awkward sentence constructions and word usage. I think it would be very helpful for me to insert comments right into her writing so that she could get a better understanding of the problems in her writing. Many of my students don't fully understand my comments of "awk" in the margins. Even if they know that it stands for awkward, they don't know how to reconstruct their sentences. Any extra conference time I can get with them is helpful. Both virtual conferencing, and inserting comments on writing will provide the specific feedback that my students need.

Readability

I decided to look at websites from two different school districts. The first is my current employer, Edina Public Schools, and the second is the district through which I got my education, Hudson Schools. The Edina website is clear. There are menus that display as the mouse rolls over them. The font is clear, and I think it is very easy to comprehend and navigate. The Hudson website, however, is not as easy to read. There is so much going on that it is not as easy to find what you need. The menus require you to click on them and they take you to another page--not as convenient as Edina where the options are shown as you pass over the menu headings. The Hudson font is small, and there is simply too much of it all over the page. Each column reads from top to bottom, which I think is not as clear as it would be if the initial page read from left to right.

Simply requiring students to complete this activity of searching and comparing would help them see what is needed for readability. In the past, students have not responded to my "list" of requirements for powerpoint presentations. I think they really need to see examples of clear sites versus sites that are difficult to comprehend and use. If students are asked to view sites as if they have a specific purpose, they may be able to better understand readability needs. Often sites look interesting when they have a lot going on, but they can then be difficult to navigate.

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